Project 04 - sketches from earlier stages

I forgot to include these...

Book Mock-Up

I am using this book for the mock-up for this project...

Project 03 - Crit.

Some things I'd like to change on this project before putting it into my portfolio are that I'd like to possibly change the background to tan (not white) or make the photo a real photo but sepia tone, or change the black lines to brown. This will help it to look "home-ier".

Positives:
Good font choice
The use of the stairs shows the feeling of a "tour" and evokes a warm or inviting feeling

Negatives:
I knew I did this once I was ready to matte but it was too late... My project was made in tabloid size and it should have actually been a bit larger in order to bleed off the board correctly.

Project 03 - Event Poster

 

(This project is going to be flush mounted; so the edge of the projects bleeds off of the board)